Ah Joshua, you had me at, “A thick yellow stream of hot drool went from his mouth to his feet.”
Heroin addiction + insect DNA = the delicious taste of a BK Whopper. This is great story telling, and it’s tough to imagine kids who would not be pulled into this story.
Nothing short of terrific. I even liked the glass and the hand wearing a ring moving in the foreground. A nice effect.
Thank you!
