Just scan the page for verbs -- visually -- and circle them. Then consider how you can replace the 'is' with something more physical and dynamic. Avoid creating the setting and elements, instead just walk into the world and begin interacting with stuff. Things and people should only come into existence when the narrator or character interacts with them. Hope that helps.
Just scan the page for verbs -- visually -- and circle them. Then consider how you can replace the 'is' with something more physical and dynamic. Avoid creating the setting and elements, instead just walk into the world and begin interacting with stuff. Things and people should only come into existence when the narrator or character interacts with them. Hope that helps.
Just scan the page for verbs -- visually -- and circle them. Then consider how you can replace the 'is' with something more physical and dynamic. Avoid creating the setting and elements, instead just walk into the world and begin interacting with stuff. Things and people should only come into existence when the narrator or character interacts with them. Hope that helps.
Perfect, thank you sir!