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Benjamin Allen's avatar

Sometimes you read a story and by the end you’re furious. Furious because you love it so much you wish you had written it. Tony, so you know, I’m fuming now.

I haven’t read anything this glorious in a while. Brilliant story, fantastic writing and voice. Very, very, very well done, man. You’ve got a new fan.

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Maegan Heil's avatar

Hi Tony! Nice work, thanks for sharing.

My favorite image/line is this: "all bouncers bald with goatees per stipulation of the bouncers union." Really cracked me up. :)

I also liked how the narrator goes through this wondering of what the girls are whispering in guys' ears but never ends up finding out for himself.

I like getting dragged around following Dan. The code language. The constant movement. The nicknames for different body shapes. The Mom.

Great work, keep it up!

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