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It still needs the illusion of caring about regular people, and the environment. All about optics. Which was a big part of the story I just got as finished as I can at my current skill level.

The newest one is my best premise yet, and biggest endeavor. Starts with a nonfiction device that reveals some big parts of plot. Gonna be 3 different voices. Narrator, Martyr, Jerk, of course. One of those is going to be a narrative cookbook. Already got some to study. Exciting stuff.

Edit: I said this the wrong way. The passive character, the aggressive character, and the one that survives the tale are all going to narrate, and have different versions of events. Gonna be a great exercise in voice. Right now Im torturing the passive character in some very fun ways. Geoff deserves to be punished for having no balls.

Also, Im establishing a social order.

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